I give up!

Judas Unchained (Commonwealth Saga, #2)Judas Unchained by Peter F. Hamilton
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

Audiobook part 1, 5h 20min, pages 1-159, ★★★☆☆, nothing really stuck with me. It was ok, I guess. Nothing really memorable happened. Or it did, but it was indistinguishable from the end of the last book…

Audiobook part 2, about 1 hour left, DNF on page 334 of the ebook. ★☆☆☆☆


“A ghost in the machine? How appropriate. It is certainly a machine’s ghost.”
“Ah, right. So, what’s it doing?”
The darkness within Dr. Friland’s hood lessened to reveal a row of smiling teeth. “Whatever it wants.”

Boy, really boring. The mystery/police procedural part is so dry and lifeless, I actually forgot what the crime was, whilst snoozing through this.

Still looking for the Starflyer and who might be playing for which team.

Mellanie is still sleeping her way through the galaxy. You‘d think with her resources she could maybe apply some brainpower here and there. And „women that are happy with the harem arrangement.“ Wow.

I just spent three days finding excuses not to pick this back up. I am a little sad that I wont read more of Ozzie. I had a peek at the last chapter and read the last few pages of the ebook. Sounds as if interesting things happen. But I can‘t face another 29 hours of this audiobook and I am not in the mood to finish reading the ebook either. I can probably find a synopsis somewhere. Sorry, too long, too detailed, too random, too boring for long stretches between the suspenseful stuff.

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Shorter lives

Clarkesworld Magazine, Issue 147Clarkesworld Magazine, Issue 147 by Neil Clarke
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

The Modern Search for the Fountain of Youth by DOUG DLUZEN, 2.561 words, ★★★☆☆

Non-fiction. About longevity and aging interventions.

Can be read for free here: http://clarkesworldmagazine.com/dluze…

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Two-Year Man by KELLY ROBSON, 4.692 words, ★★★☆☆

Dystopian story. Bleak society, a lab growing babies, pretty depressing, little hope.

Can be read for free at Clarkesworld here: http://clarkesworldmagazine.com/robso…
Or at the author‘s website: https://kellyrobson.com/two-year-man/

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Master Zhao: The Tale of an Ordinary Time Traveler by ZHANG RAN, 12.586 words, ★★★★☆

Exploration of the possible ways a time traveler can diverge from the main path. With sketches. Pretty interesting, unfortunately with an unsatisfactory ending.

Can be read for free here: http://clarkesworldmagazine.com/zhang…

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The Names and Motions by SHELDON J. PACOTTI, 7026 words, ★☆☆☆☆

Frankly, I didn‘t get it. Not for me.

Can be read for free here: http://clarkesworldmagazine.com/pacot…

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When We Find Our Voices by ELEANNA CASTROIANNI, 10080 words, ★★★½☆
„A race of bird-people is forced to save mankind from extinction. Contemplating gender, procreation, duty and intimacy through the eyes of an agender, asexual protagonist. Family, friendship, love, oppression and rebellion in a half-ruined world.“

Hm, odd. The Voices are something that is taken from the bird-people after birth. Voices provide energy. Nuclear fission? Not quite sure what to make of it. Interesting, uncomfortable. Not sure it all makes sense. I have a unscientific image of how the making of an egg could look like, but can‘t think of a way this could actually work. Worth reading just for the oddness of it.

Can be read for free here: http://clarkesworldmagazine.com/castr…

„Eleanna Castroianni is a genderqueer writer, poet and oral storyteller from Greece. A cultural geographer by training, Eleanna tells stories from the margins of history and the far futures of the Anthropocene. They live in Athens, Greece with a number of string instruments.“
Author‘s website: https://eleannacastroianni.wordpress.com

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Bringing Down the Sky by ALAN BAO, 11088 words, ★★★★★
Climatefic. The world has turned grey, the rich live under domes, the poor struggle with acid rain and collect clean air from high up to earn a living. USA, China, politics… Very good!

Can be found for free here

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Marshmallows by D.A. XIAOLIN SPIRES, 3430 words, ★★★☆☆
A world that has gotten so gruesome and dilapidated that people on their daily commute use visual and auditory enhancements to see a more appealing world. I did not like the storytelling much per se, but the idea was interesting enough.

She herself calls this her augmented reality holiday story at her blog

She also mentions being inspired by another short story. Although that one was even shorter, I liked it more for where it took me as a reader.

Can be found for free here

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We opened the box….

Pandora's Star (Commonwealth Saga, #1)Pandora’s Star by Peter F. Hamilton
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

This is a very long book and really should be read with the plan to continue with Judas Unchained. The story unfolds with the speed of a geriatric snail, so bring patience and time and appreciation for the little things along. I took me two months to get through the audiobook—ok, I am slow with audio—and I did it with the print version next to me, to double-check on details.
The world building is great, this is full of great ideas. And when there is action, it is well done. Characters take their time to develop and the aliens are truly scary in their otherness. This is good, although I wonder what it would be like at half the page count…

Thoughts and comments, while working my way through this monster:
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Audiobook Part 1: 6 h 56 min (183 pages), Chapters 1-6, ★★★½☆
Glacially slow set-up and introduction of a variety of characters. Very little plot progression. I liked what was there. Alas, it was not for the impatient and easily bored (aka ME!). I wonder how all these very different stories will come together.

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Audiobook Part 2: 7 h 22 min (pages 184-376), Chapter 7-11, ★★★★★
Interesting biology and chemistry! Really cool idea, although Merredin is not necessarily a planet I would like to visit. Just that by itself is a great plot bunny for a colonization/first contact novel! There are several other planets and constructs in this part of the book, that would make for great settings for separate novels. The world building here is fascinating.

With all people living multiple lives, I would love to have a timeline sketched out at the back of the book. If I should ever decide to re-read this book, I plan to make annotations and try to figure out a timeline myself.

You definitely need patience with this book. Interesting things happen and then you switch POV and…. something else happens and it‘s all a very loooong game….

But by Chapter 10 (yes, yes, almost 300 pages of set-up), things are starting to come together, the many characters are becoming familiar names and the plot picks up the pace.

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Audiobook Part 3: 7 h 30 min (pages 377-574), Chapters 12-16, ★★★★☆
The characters are finally familiar and we are getting into the meat of the story.

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Audiobook Part 4: 8 h 52 min (pages 575-806), Chapters 17-21, ★★★★☆
Chapter 18 was horrific! We are moving towards a climax… maybe… Besides the action I still enjoyed Ozzie‘s chapters the most.

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Audiobook Part 5: 6 h 48 min (pages 807-988), Chapters 22-25, ★★★★☆
Wow, I finished! I thought this would never end. There was some light wrapping up of the status quo at the end, but I guess it would be a good strategy to have Judas Unchained ready to go! I pretty much continued with the audio straight away.

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On the Marie Celeste of the Commonwealth universe: https://peterfhamilton.fandom.com/wik…
And the RL Mary Celeste: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mary_Ce…

The Commonwealth, publication order:
https://www.goodreads.com/series/1085…

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Meh? Not sure…

Interference (Semiosis Duology, #2)Interference by Sue Burke
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

I had trouble to remember the book title, whilst reading this. In my head I was reading Inheritance. You have to deal with what you were given, good or bad. That holds true for Karola from Earth as much as for the people on Pax.

I made an effort to finish Semiosis, because I liked the world-building so much. I wasn‘t a fan of the pacing or the tone. So I went into this with some trepidation. And it took me longer than usual to read the first two chapters. At which point I was pretty much done and could have gladly stopped reading.

I came to dislike the almost infantile tone of the communication between the characters and their internal thoughts. Why did they all sound as if they were a bit simple? No complex thought processes or critical thinking seemed to be present.

In Chapter 3 the new explorers from Earth arrived on Pax. Great opportunity to give the reader an external view of that society. I did not like the execution at all. The characters were not believable and bordered on caricatures. They had the emotional maturity and mental capacities of gnats. I almost DNFd right there and then!

Curiosity kept me going. I enjoyed chapters 4 and 5 a lot more. The chapter with Queen Thunderclap gave some nice insights into the societal structure of the glassmakers.

Chapter 5 was fun for its action and Stevland, my favourite character, finally showing up again a little more prominently.

The author shines when she goes into the scientific aspects of her story. Society, biology, cultural understanding and interaction. Writing believable, realistic characters is most definitely not her strength.

One of the biggest missed chances of this novel in my opinion is further exploration of Karola‘s character. And of the coral plain. I would really liked to have dived into that ecosystem more deeply.

Chapter 6, finally, was a Stevland chapter. And the longest chapter of the book. I liked it, but it also confused me. The story didn‘t gell for me, there were things that did not make sense.

The last chapter was was fun and the epilogue left the reader with interest in more.

Bottom line, it was allover the place. Some parts I actively disliked, sometimes I was bored, sometimes it was fun and I was fascinated. As a whole it was not a gripping read. I might pick up something else by the author, but she will not become an instant buy.

I received this free e-copy from the publisher/author via NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review, thank you!

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Update on the Commonwealth

Pandora's Star (Commonwealth Saga, #1)Pandora’s Star by Peter F. Hamilton
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

I am listening to the audiobook, with the odd peek at my paperback. As this is a doorstopper, the audio comes in 5 parts. I‘ll update as I go along…

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Audiobook Part 1: 6 h 56 min (183 pages), Chapters 1-6, ★★★½☆
Glacially slow set-up and introduction of a variety of characters. Very little plot progression. I liked what was there. Alas, it was not for the impatient and easily bored (aka ME!). I wonder how all these very different stories will come together.

Chapter list with characters (potential spoilers):

– Prologue
NASA Captain-Pilot Wilson Kime, stepping on Mars in third place…
Nigel Sheldon and college geek with wild Afro (Ozzie), appearing in an opening in space…

– Chapter One
Dudley Bose and the vanishing star…
Dyson Alpha, the vanishing star…
Lion Walker Eyre, man with a telescope.

– Chapter Two
Adam Elvin, man of mystery and many faces, weapons procurer.
Nigel Murphy, a comrade with weapons.
Sabbah, undercover comrade.
Rachael Lancier, arms dealer.
Chief Investigator Paula Myo.
Don Mares and Maggie Lidsey, Police detectives.
Tarlo and Renne, Investigators from the Directorate.

– Chapter Three
Rafael Columbia, chief of the Intersolar Serious Crimes Directorate. Bunch of other committee members.
Tara Jennifer Shaheef, woman out of luck.
Wyobie Cotal, lover boy.

– Chapter Four
Justine Burnelli, having fun with a hyperglider. Her friend Estella.
Kazimir McFoster, wild man in a kilt.

– Chapter Five
Wilson Kime again, retired. Emily, his grand daughter.
Paula Myo, chasing Elvin…
Wyobie Cotal again, diminished…

– Chapter Six
Mark Vernon, fist lifer on Augusta.
Liz, his beautiful wife, not a first lifer…
Barry, their son. Sandy, baby girl.
Marty, Mark‘s dad, and Amanda, his girlfriend. Slightly scandalous.
Tarlo and Renne again, investigating…
April Gallar Halgarth, girl with memory problems.

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Audiobook Part 2: 7 h 22 min (pages 184-376), Chapter 7-11, ★★★★★

Interesting biology and chemistry! Really cool idea, although Merredin is not necessarily a planet I would like to visit. Just that by itself is a great plot bunny for a colonization/first contact novel! There are several other planets and constructs in this part of the book, that would make for great settings for separate novels. The world building here is fascinating.

With all people living multiple lives, I would love to have a timeline sketched out at the back of the book. If I should ever decide to re-read this book, I plan to make annotations and try to figure out a timeline myself.

You definitely need patience with this book. Interesting things happen and then you switch POV and…. something else happens and it‘s all a very loooong game….

But by Chapter 10 (yes, yes, almost 300 pages of set-up), things are starting to come together, the many characters are becoming familiar names and the plot picks up the pace.

Chapter list with characters, settings and spoilery ramblings: (spoilers!!!)

– Chapter Seven
Oscar Monroe, wormhole builder and planetary explorer, showing up again on Merredin.
Dudley Bose, Leonida City, discoverer of astronomical phenomena, feeling entitled… His wife Wendy and Brad, with Earle, the News man, no last name…

– Chapter Eight
Ozzie Fernandez Isaac, on his asteroid and travelling the Path.
Nine Sky, the elf…ehem… Silfen.
Orion, the orphan boy.

Elves! Who could say no to that! Silvergalde is a more tempting planet. And down the rabbit hole we go!

– Chapter Nine
Adam Elvin showing up again, on Lothian. Very Scottish…
Bradley Johansson—I feel like I should know him from a previous chapter.
Tara Jennifer Shaheef and her new husband, deSavoel.
Morton, Tara‘s Ex. His girlfriend Melanie.

Starting to wonder. Well, continuing to wonder… why Tara and Wyobie were killed. And I am also starting to want a timeline… Morton has been rejuvenated twice since Tara‘s death and mentioned 40 years since….

– Chapter 10
Oscar Monroe (wormhole builder, chapter 7), McClain Gilbert, and the High Angel—another very cool idea worthy of its own novel.
Paula and Hoshe, meeting the Raiel and passing Tara‘s memories to Qatux. Another cool concept. Human ethics. Judging others through your own lens—should you or shouldn‘t you?
Ron Tannie, regretting taking this job on Anshun. Wowza, this is the action I like to see in a good SF opera! And well played, Wilson!
Lennie Al Husan, reporter on Anshun—at this point I wonder if all these seemingly random characters will end up as personnel and passengers on the Second Chance?

– Chapter 11
Meeting Sara and old Bill, the Korrok-hi. Cocktail hour on the ice planet.
Rafael Columbia shows up again and proves to be an idiot that Paula is not too fussed with.
At this point in the narrative, I would say that Ozzie is one of my favourite characters. Together with Wilson and Paula Myo.

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Still to come:
Part 2: 7 h 22 min
Part 3: 7 h 30 min
Part 4: 8 h 52 min
Part 5: 6 h 48 min

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